Using Google Docs to repair writing

Using Google docs to ‘repair’ writing. 

Highlighted section is split into ideas for the student – he then needs to make the repairs himself.  Note the chat box on the right.  I highlighted places where the past tense 'broke' in his writing and he repaired those sections.  

And the ‘fixed version.

Still not perfect, but the presenting issue of sentence construction has been addressed.


Question – does this constitute too much assistance for coursework?